Deep End — Vellumwise series cover

Deep End

His daughter starts swimming lessons and he wants to be in the pool with her, not watching from the side.

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The premise

His daughter starts swimming lessons and he wants to be in the pool with her, not watching from the side. Olu works through decades-old fear to real competence, ending with an open-water swim he would once have refused to watch.

The protagonist

Olu Brightman-Sato — 34-year-old who never learned to swim after a childhood scare

The council

Every council member is an original fictional character. None represents, quotes or is endorsed by a real person.

Imelda Ruiz

swimming instructor

Patient; comfort before technique

Dr Pavel Hruska

motor-learning scientist

Analytical; skills grow in small repeatable steps

Dr Grace Nwankwo

anxiety specialist

Gentle; fear shrinks with gradual exposure

How the story moves

From the shallow end to an open-water swim; a panic in deep water halfway through is the turning point, and his daughter becomes his coach.

What readers take away

  • Water confidence and controlled breathing
  • Floating and body position
  • Front-crawl technique
  • Backstroke and treading water
  • Turning and resting safely
  • Open-water safety
  • Cold-water shock and self-rescue
  • Fear and gradual exposure
  • Breathe bilaterally in front crawl
  • Swim continuously for 400 metres
  • Choose safe open-water venues
  • Use flotation and visibility aids

The books

  1. 1The shallow end Planned
  2. 2Breathing Planned
  3. 3Open water Planned

Book titles are working titles and may change before publication. No book is on sale until the complete series is finished, checked and released.